The writing of IELTS. Task 2

The writing of IELTS

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

Write about the following topic: 

Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.

what extent is this a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

My answer:

Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. Modern technology is what we use every day in our life such as mobile phone and computer. Overall, modern technology like those has video and others. However, using advance technology sometimes makes the bad impacts for its user.

Modern technology really helps us. For instance, it gives us ease in our life. Mobile phone or computer is one of the modern technologies we usually use to download copyrighted music, files, video, and books on the internet for no charge. Also, by using mobile phone, we can add many friends by using social media like BBM, LINE, Whatsapp, Facebook, and others. We can use them to do online business on mobile phone such as selling a range of products bringing profits like clothes, air tickets, and others. It can be compared with the condition on the days of our parents still using manual methods in all of their lives. Getting music, they must go to market to buy cassettes and books. In contrast, now we can get music, video, book, and files for no charge by using modern technology.

On the other hand, modern technology often gives bad impacts for its users. Especially for children who have already been using mobile phones. There are many inappropriate contents to be reached by children because they can’t filter the good or bad information for them so that it can make a bad impact on the development of their mental. Also, modern technology is often used for media of scans by much wrong information to trick the victim. For example, in the accidents requiring the family of victim to send some money to the one claiming of the member of hospital, it will hurt many parties especially victims surely.

in conclusion, while often giving bad impact to its user, using modern technology is important to remember that benefits offered by the advance technology are very much then it can facilitate us to do anything that we want.

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