Japanese Marriage. How to build the paragraph of IELTS. Writing Task 1

How to build the paragraph of IELTS

This is the steps to make the paragraph of IELTS

1.       Ada perubahan jenis pernikahan di Jepang antara 1950 hingga 2000.

2.       Pada tahun 1950 jumlah pernikahan atas dasar cinta hanya 20%.

3.       Pada tahun 1970 pernikahan semasam itu meningkat 45%.

4.       Pada tahun 2000 ada penurunan dari pernikahan atas dasar perjodohan hingga 15%.

1.       There was a change in the type of marriage in Japan between 1950 and 2000.

2.       In 1950 the number of love marriages was only 20%.

3.       In 1970 the number of love marriages had increased dramatically by 45 %.

4.        In 2000 there was a drastic decline of arranged marriage less than 15%.

Combine all of those sentences!

For example:

There was a noticeable change in the type of marriage in Japan over the period of 1950 to 2000. In 1950 the number of love marriages was only about/approximately 20%. In 1970 the number of such kind of marriages increased dramatically by about 45% and in 1990 there was a significant trend in the term of arranged marriages because there was a drastic decline less than 15%.

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