The writing of IELTS. Task 1

The writing of IELTS

Task 1

 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The graph below shows the employment patterns in Alia over the period of 1920 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

My answer:

The graph shows the employment patters by sector of Agriculture, Manufacturing, Professional, Business, and Others from 1920 to 2000 in Alia.

From the figure, it can be seen that Agriculture was the only sector showing continuously considerable decrease in the employment patterns between 1920 and 2000 from about 90 percent to 10 percent. The employment patterns of Manufacturing and Professional showed quite similar growth rising from 4 percent in 1920 to about 7 percent in 1960; then, the both sectors experienced significant increase by about 38 percent for Manufacturing and 30 percent for Professional.

The different pattern can be viewed from Business degreasing marginally from 10 percent in 1920 to 2 percent in 1960 and then rising by 20 percent in 2000. The Others sector showed a fluctuation pattern rising marginally from about 10 percent in 1920 to about 15 percent in 1940 and then decreasing by less than 14 percent in 1960. This sector remained stagnant by about 10 percent in the next years.

It is clear that the employment patters in Alia between 1920 and 2000 rose for all of those except Agriculture and Others.

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