You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader
with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Many people believe that women
make better parents than men and that this is way they have the greater role in
raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as
women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your
point and view.
Give reasons for your answer.
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and
support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
For example:
It is largely know that the
parenting of children has different patterns of the roles and responsibilities
of men and women. Many people still believe that the women are better than men
in parenting, especially in undertaking the responsibility as mothers, while
some believe that this conception is not necessarily right.
In many societies, women are
considered as the best parents for their children. Those are responsible to
manage anything related to the household such as cleaning the house, parenting
the children, washing the clothes and equipment, shopping to the market and
cooking the meal for entire family members. But, this belief is facing the
challenges nowadays, because, in fact, the women can easily get and perform the
job in the working outside of their homes as well as men.
In this condition, the both of men
and women are collectively responsible to manage their household, including parenting.
This condition also leads many people to rethink about the segregation or
separation of the duties between men and women. So, nowadays, many people can
still perform in job outside and manage the household.
In many cities, many people device
the house duties between wife and husband, while other give their children,
especially for their babies, to be parented by qualified baby-sister. However,
the mothers as the natural parents of their children give the natural milk for
their child health.
We argue that women can give much attention
to their children, if they still work outside. Moreover, this will lead to
correct the conception of the women are only capable in managing the household
and parenting the children. The fact of gender equality in modern days has
proven that the parenting can be managed by both of men and women.
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